Hey, Sean! I enjoyed watching your elevator pitch because your tone of voice and speech pace kept me engaged throughout. You also really emphasize that only YOU have the solution to this problem, which is key during an elevator pitch. I did notice some repetition as you described your product, so maybe just prepare with a note card to make sure you hit the key points and explain your idea as clearly as you can!
Hi Sean, I think you did a very impressive job of using hand motions that helped you illustrate to your viewers the ideas being expressed. I also enjoyed how you detailed the benefits of your idea with mobile phone jumper cables to get people to think about how they could actually use it in their daily lives. At times you did seem a little stuck, but I think that this just shows how much you truly care about your idea and wanting it to be a success for everyone!
Hi Sean, I think you did a great job of presenting this elevator pitch. Good job of dressing up to look the part and finding a space that is a professional setting. I think that your idea is a pretty intriguing one. The idea to have the sort of jumper cables for the phones would be pretty cool. I do not know if people would be very willing to give them their phone juice unless needed but this could be beneficial for emergency situations.
Hi Sean, I think you did a splendid job. I like the fact that you dressed up and was prepared for it. You had great tone of voice and poise throughout the speech. I can tell that you are passionate about your topic and you should keep that enthusiasm because it will take you are take you far.
Hey, Sean! I enjoyed watching your elevator pitch because your tone of voice and speech pace kept me engaged throughout. You also really emphasize that only YOU have the solution to this problem, which is key during an elevator pitch. I did notice some repetition as you described your product, so maybe just prepare with a note card to make sure you hit the key points and explain your idea as clearly as you can!
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ReplyDeleteI think you did a very impressive job of using hand motions that helped you illustrate to your viewers the ideas being expressed. I also enjoyed how you detailed the benefits of your idea with mobile phone jumper cables to get people to think about how they could actually use it in their daily lives. At times you did seem a little stuck, but I think that this just shows how much you truly care about your idea and wanting it to be a success for everyone!
Hi Sean, I think you did a great job of presenting this elevator pitch. Good job of dressing up to look the part and finding a space that is a professional setting. I think that your idea is a pretty intriguing one. The idea to have the sort of jumper cables for the phones would be pretty cool. I do not know if people would be very willing to give them their phone juice unless needed but this could be beneficial for emergency situations.
ReplyDeleteHi Sean, I think you did a splendid job. I like the fact that you dressed up and was prepared for it. You had great tone of voice and poise throughout the speech. I can tell that you are passionate about your topic and you should keep that enthusiasm because it will take you are take you far.
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